John Deere

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john deere toy tractor wet with spring's low cloud's moisture.... silence pierces air

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James Peranteau

Date: 3/29/2015 9:40:00 AM

Wow, this was a great terse write Sara ! I was looking to read one of your writes today and notice the title of this write and was excited when I read it ! I'm a John Dear devotie ! TY...Have a blessed week dear poet. Much love, james

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/24/2015 9:42:00 AM

Oh I love this...my great nephew loves everything..."John Deere". A wonderful Senryu.

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 8:54:00 AM

Sara, such beauty in a few words, 7 rating, and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2015 11:26:00 PM

that last line is sure cool. silence piercing the air!!