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Jodi Revised

Please read about the poem ~ How can I express my sadness as I turn on CNN . For the man who was suffering as he left so beautiful inside taken so handsome and young , by the Sin of Pride . His Family now weeps for a very long time , he has become all our true loves in mind. For he a Charismatic man , intelligent, well spoken , a man so hard to find . What has our World come to What drives one to insanity, to take another so Horrifically~ The Truth does not Lie Jodi , for you holds no Glory . The Truth in rejection so sad to face, willing to give away everything at all cost.. No matter how much she Loved him , In capable of love through possession , There is a lesson through the worst pain . Through incapable love lies , betrayal . You have taken another that was not yours to take , You have caused great sorrow and pain Your love of self in Vain ~ Giving her freedom through the spirit "Death " will not make the sad better . In justice , is a mirror and cell for eternity . In my heart everyone deserves Redemption , leaving this writing only the title of her name many would like you to suffer this life and the next . In respect of the Man who has left , I believe he would forgive her refusing to punish by Death .

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Date: 8/10/2013 3:14:00 AM
I've never attempted an epitaph, good job Yvette with "Jodi"! MC
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Date: 8/10/2013 1:43:00 PM
I am curious , are you lost in happiness like I when you write !!
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Shanity Rain
Date: 8/10/2013 1:42:00 PM
well, I really thought about that as a " category " , epitaph ..and it is not mine to write , although , that is what came to mind . In this ..I do not want to offend . Thank-you my Friend :)

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