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Job the Phoenix

The yearnings and groanings of afflicted Job, Echoing in the silence of boredom and loneliness, A melancholic and sober music, Giving sweet and beautiful tone, Only to the ears of his listeners. A reminiscence he thought, Perhaps will relieve his pains. Used to be the best For once upon a time, Once a valued gold But now a cast out stone. The only thing left to brag Now but left in the past. Lamenting at the corner of confusion, Crying foul on matters of his affliction, Asking the same puzzling questions, Over and over again, Though rhetorical but expecting answers, Why do the righteous suffer? Then out came the thundering voice, Able to scare the bravest, But comfort to Job the weakest. The consoling words of supreme God of Job, Puting an end to all his woes. There is hope for a seed, Though it be dead in the soil, But out of mysteries will sprout out, Blooming proudly with new kinds In thousands, millions and billions, Just like a phoenix rebirth out of its doom. Plot: The poem is based on the biblical character of Job whose fortune was restored after he has lost everything including family out of the verge of complete hopelessness.

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Date: 4/10/2014 7:32:00 AM
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Johnson Adeniyi
Date: 4/10/2014 7:48:00 AM
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Date: 4/4/2014 5:19:00 PM
Johnson, awesome free verse poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hi Johnson, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Johnson Adeniyi
Date: 4/10/2014 8:12:00 AM
hey, thanks for the cool welcoming gesture. Am a Yoruba Nigerian guy who has just discovered passion for poetry and is aspiring to becoming better and better in the art through inspirations from poems of great poets like yourself. I've gone through some of your poems, and menn.., they are great. Looking forward to learning some of those skills from you.
Date: 4/4/2014 7:32:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Johnson :) - I choose your first long :)) and nice written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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