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Jesus on a Unicycle

We do not see Jesus on a float, in the big Thanksgiving Day parade. Nor in a shopping mall handing out, cheap Toys that child laborers have made. You don’t see giant Jesus blow ups, bobbing around out on people’s lawn. He’s not parked in his sleigh upon the roof, with a hundred bright flashing lights on. They don’t sell you Jesus door knockers, napkin holders or pepper shakers. He does not drink Coke with polar bears, or pose with kids for picture takers. Was pretty easy to figure out, why kids like Santa more than Jesus. Because his advertisement firm has learned, instant satisfaction will please us. What four-year old kid will want to wait, ‘til he dies to go to paradise. They just want to open their present, and eating cookies for breakfast might be nice. If Jesus wants to be a big hit, he will need to go on to TV. Ride a unicycle down Main street, while shouting out Ho! Ho! Ho! with glee.

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Date: 2/19/2024 7:21:00 PM
Sadly enough many trade paradise for temporary pleasure. Blessings!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/19/2024 8:02:00 PM
So true. Everybody wants instant satisfaction nowadays.
Date: 2/19/2024 12:42:00 PM
Interesting thoughts Jerry... You make a valid point..
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/19/2024 8:01:00 PM
I appreciate the comment, Silent One.
Date: 2/19/2024 5:05:00 AM
I like the train of thought and your poem brings home the reality of what our culture values and the importance it places on consumerism and mass marketing. I say this with a smile: Maybe Jesus could try social media in order to be a big hit. :-) Am faving...have a great day, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/19/2024 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for the fav, Sara. Have a most pleasant evening, my friend.
Date: 2/18/2024 6:19:00 PM
I think that occurred in San Francisco! Well intended funny Jerry, good one!!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/19/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Mark. I appreciate you stopping by.

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