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Jesus Christ

We can't forget the christ, but christmas must come !

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Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 6:33:00 AM

Thanks; Anne-Lise is correct. You can do the 17 syllables in other formats. But, usually three lines (5 syllables, 7 sylls, 5 sylls). Now, it's Happy Easter to me and everybody. God bless you STREET POET. And I am happy to tell U that Jesus Loves you, and has the best Fire Insurance Policy with Dividends built-in. Anil Deo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2016 7:58:00 AM

- Lovely written, Street Poet - (I'm no expert ... but I do not think this is a haiku poem - Haiku has three lines 5-7-5- syllable) - Happy weekend and best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Street Poet
Date: 12/17/2016 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for your wishes and kind suggetions dear. And Merry Christmas to u and your family. Next time I will follow the actual writing form.