Jerusalem

Jerusalem...Jerusalem I promise...I promise I will reply for the call I promise...I promise I will bring down the wall I promise...I promise I will defeat the devils I promise...I promise With an army countless Like pebbles I promise...I promise To finish the goal I promise...I promise I will reply for the call I promise...I promise

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Hammam Hamad

Date: 5/22/2012 6:14:00 AM

Yes, almost all the Traitors leaders of all the countries were promising that...,but guess they are falling one by one....Regards,

Carol Eastman
Date: 10/15/2012 4:34:00 PM

Some how I don't think the whole Middle east in it's Arab Spring has accomplished much. Killed a lot of good people to replace bad leaders with probably more bad leaders. Violence is seldom the answer. A dictator or tyrant is still a dictator and tyrant no matter who they replace.

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/21/2012 3:44:00 PM

a LOT of promises. they have decieved you.

Hammam Hamad
Date: 5/22/2012 2:46:00 AM

Dear Mr.John ... at the end of days every Bad president will fall ... and as you know I'm from Libya and our x-leader"Algadafi" the tyrant was Non-Muslim...His aunt is living in Israel...did that sound fishy here.

John Loving Iii
Date: 5/21/2012 3:45:00 PM

they been promising that sence 1948.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2012 12:44:00 PM

Alot of promise Hammam....well done. :) - oxox Anne-Lise

Hammam Hamad
Date: 3/22/2012 12:48:00 PM

Yep , me and almost all the Muslims think that way. We will eventually do it . It's a promise(^^). Regards,