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Jellytot rainbow

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Jellytot rainbow

To love you lots 
like jellytots 
I am just a lonely heart 
Dreaming in the clouds 
In the mist 
of angel tears I lie 

Memories of battles 
in hell 
In the fork 
of the crossroads 
Dreams of forever love 
In a confused 
arena my mind 

All battled scarred 
worn down 
A cross upon 
my shoulders 
Laden heavy 
with all its hurt 
I have fallen to ground 
Only to come 
Upon the crossroads again 

Standing tall searching 
The window of light 
in a far 
off distance 
Light at the end 
of the tunnel 
If not 
on this planet 

My soul 
leaves my body 
My host of scars 
With wings 
joins my spirit 
In some faraway 
skies blue 
Flying to heaven 

Let there be love 
Stars of all colors 
Strewn across 
a night sky 
A mystical paradise 

Lost loves dream 
Only to be found 
in heaven 
In a jellytot rainbow 
My pot of love

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  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:50:00 AM
    Great imagery, a very lovely write!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU SO KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 12:12:00 AM
    I really like the taste of jellytots..Ow rainbow..where are you?Rainbows always get themselves shown after the rain..So if you re at crossroads..you re very close to the coloured path.I loved the idea.Somehow rainbows remind me of coloured confetti in the sky as well.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LIKE THE COMMENT VERY SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL I TIP MY HAT THANK YOU KINDLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Lovely visuals here, Liam. I enjoy reading your most uplifting poetry. I'll have to check out some more. Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LAURA THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:49:00 PM
    HI Liam, Another colorful write you found somewhere over the rainbow...Well done my friend, Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KEN FOR THE BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:31:00 PM
    Nice. I like this one

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/10/2013 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED