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Jellytot Rainbow

To love you lots like jellytots I am just a lonely heart Dreaming in the clouds In the mist of angel tears I lie Memories of battles in hell In the fork of the crossroads Dreams of forever love In a confused arena my mind All battled scarred worn down A cross upon my shoulders Laden heavy with all its hurt I have fallen to ground Only to come Upon the crossroads again Standing tall searching The window of light in a far off distance Light at the end of the tunnel If not on this planet My soul leaves my body My host of scars With wings joins my spirit In some faraway skies blue Flying to heaven Let there be love Stars of all colors Strewn across a night sky A mystical paradise Lost loves dream Only to be found in heaven In a jellytot rainbow My pot of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2013 12:12:00 AM
I really like the taste of jellytots..Ow rainbow..where are you?Rainbows always get themselves shown after the rain..So if you re at crossroads..you re very close to the coloured path.I loved the idea.Somehow rainbows remind me of coloured confetti in the sky as well.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 4:43:00 AM
LIKE THE COMMENT VERY SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL I TIP MY HAT THANK YOU KINDLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
Date: 9/9/2013 10:19:00 PM
Lovely visuals here, Liam. I enjoy reading your most uplifting poetry. I'll have to check out some more. Always, Laura
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 4:41:00 AM
LAURA THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/9/2013 8:49:00 PM
HI Liam, Another colorful write you found somewhere over the rainbow...Well done my friend, Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 4:32:00 AM
THANK YOU KEN FOR THE BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND
Date: 9/9/2013 8:31:00 PM
Nice. I like this one
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/10/2013 6:07:00 AM
THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED

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