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She storms into the room there is fire in her eyes and thunder in her step rage rumbling reckless She's livid a live wire of fire charged She's on the move To punish Is it a rumor or reality? He has explaining to do... She rushes at him Pounding on his chest words pent up all day rush out in deluge drenching him he tries to pin her hands down to make her understand to undo this "misunderstand" but she pushes him her pride scorching him her eyes sparking passion raging ~~~R*A*G*I*N*G~~~ He pushes her against the wall pins her hands above her head "Listen to me! You got it all wrong!!!" she pushes against him breasts heaving legs kicking and he's inflamed her passion burns him combusts in his mind and he crushes her with his body she bites his lips as they close over hers he loses his grip her fingernails dig into his bare chest trails of red Growling in pain He forces her.... kicking and screaming... down to the floor Pins her again "Listen! WOMAN!" She looks up into his face breathless and he goes for her mouth again Taking her lips into his mouth sucking fiercely his tongue tames fierce...his need to possess to claim She fights to free her hands and they are on his neck Pulling him in...in Her lips respond in like his hand finds her hair leverage...a grasp he pulls to expose her neck And he attacks kisses...bites...His revenge His innocence turned to intensity's indignation she sighs...she moans... the sounds goading him on As he loses himself in her cleavage licking up her perfume His favorite scent... sensuous sexy sweet the storm is fever pitch in a flash of lightning speed He lies her bare and thunders in the thighs she opens for him...wide eyes closed she bites her lower lip to muffle her cries as he rides....rides His victory ride of righteous pride and she's left breathless...spent in a storm of tears released...repentant of her insane jealousy the storm passes over and in the stillness he speaks... his voice shattered...weak in her presence now calm meek "Your anger is beautiful your rage my relish... but now...come," His voice a whisper as he pulls her in to him "Come into my arms and know the truth.... You're my one and only My Passion STORM Is YOU....YOU Serenity...is overrated."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/5/2020 2:42:00 AM
A wild ride ride in the words. I liked the drive and the energy of the words. You brought the reader in and you held them. Nice ending to the outstanding poetry.
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
Eileen, your work is outstanding, this brought back a memory that I relieved the same picture years go with a different twist I divorced him. 7++ my dear friend Eve
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:48:00 AM
raw and passionately daring, eileen... nice to see this back on the wall!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:22:00 PM
Thanks, Nette. Yes, it is a little over the top, but...I had fun sharing it. Hugs
Date: 7/6/2015 3:25:00 AM
I just love this one... I can see everything so vividly! Your work is always worth reading more than once. This one is one of my favorites of yours. Keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. Very sweet of you to share these words of commendation. Does my heart good. Hope all is well with you, Dear. hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 10:27:00 AM
Eileen, your write is very sensual and passionate and full of fierce love, 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, who knew it would be selected as potd, wow
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:47:00 PM
Broken Wings, your work deserved to be showcased. It was very well written and deeply expressive. I'm happy for you, dear. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 9:46:00 AM
Re: your comment- please don't leave. We need fire. And passion. Viv x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thanks, Viv. I've had someone say that my work was too...explicit. It cut deep. Still, I am true to myself, for what I think of myself matters most. I'm grateful for your words of affirmation, dear. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 9:02:00 AM
So glad to see this one posted again. YRH has increased the soup temperature by at least 10 degrees. Now I can re-enter this one into my favorites.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:48:00 PM
HEE HEE...YRH...is up to her antics, again. I hope she her subjects enjoy her sultriness. Thanks, Richard, for lifting my spirits. Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 1:26:00 AM
I knew we were in for a rollercoaster ride when I saw that you'd picked a picture with such feverish brushtrokes, Eileen. Anyway, now that I've read it I'm going to turn the fire extinguisher on myself. Phew. Viv x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
This is a poem I had posted some time ago and then deleted, Viv. I was planning on leaving this place. Now I'm slowly putting them back up. Glad you liked this one. There is something about unbridled passion that gets to me. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 7/4/2015 8:17:00 PM
This runs the whole gamut of emotions! You are amazing at these and as Charmaine said, a great movie theme! Love ya Miss Boop! xxx
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:41:00 PM
Went from pg 13 to R to xx.....wow Eileen, i want to give your pen a name but i dont know which....i loved it!!
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Date: 7/4/2015 3:17:00 PM
Eileen...Whilst I was readng these passionate lines filled with mistrust,love hate ,jealousy,I was imagining a movie gong in my mind..I always love those scenes in movies when from a fight without reason,lovers end up in eachothers arms.Your words are even more deep andcpleasurable to read.Those kind of situations gives an exciting fluttering feelinf inside when happeningvin real life and end up in happy endings.A favourite from me !
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