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Jealousy

Penumbra reflections of darkness weigh cynical in my soul. When crepuscular dreams creep through the twilight I hear their sonorous songs sing their deceptive toll like dysphonic bells, their desultory tones cry the devil's delight, belying the calm of the halcyon night. Jealousy eats at me, masticating my miserable flesh, each time I see your opulent smile it takes yet another bite, chewing slowly savoring and seeking my heart to enmesh as visceral emotions move slow through molasses midnight, exuberant in their need to leave me contrite.
01/31/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/7/2016 5:24:00 PM
true poetry emerged from these ten words. All I got from the words was a strange story. I bet you scored high with this one. BIG congrats. Later I will go see what level he put you.
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James Inman
Date: 2/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I found your write quite engaging.
Date: 2/6/2016 8:58:00 PM
you are welcome James. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 9:34:00 AM
James, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 2/6/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you PD.
Date: 2/5/2016 6:44:00 AM
Beautifully written James...Big Congratulations on your Win!
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James Inman
Date: 2/5/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading it, Grace, and the nice comment.
Date: 2/3/2016 9:27:00 AM
Hi James, this is such an amazing write using ten very difficult words. I congratulate you on your creativity in putting together these seemingly unrelated words into one excellent cohesive piece! Congratulations, my friend on a wonderful win! Pandita
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 11:03:00 AM
The way I write in the comments, its a wonder I can write a poem at all, LOL. Thanks again.
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Pandita. Yours was one of the ones a liked best in this contest.
Date: 2/2/2016 10:39:00 PM
James,, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 8:52:00 AM
Hi SKAT, thank you.
Date: 2/2/2016 7:08:00 PM
Hi James: Congratulations on your high placement. Those were difficult words and you made them flow into your story very naturally. Being a fellow contestant, I bow to your prowess. SuZ
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 8:51:00 AM
Suzanne, thank you for your lovely visit and the nice words. I enjoyed your write as well.
Date: 2/2/2016 9:27:00 AM
Great Write James. Congratulations on your win.
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Sathya.
Date: 2/2/2016 7:23:00 AM
Greetings James. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Teddy.
Date: 2/2/2016 1:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem!
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thanks for reading it, Susan, and for the nice comment.
Date: 2/1/2016 6:57:00 PM
Well done, james! Congrats on your well deserved placement!
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Balveen.
Date: 2/1/2016 5:48:00 PM
Nicely done, James. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 2/1/2016 5:25:00 PM
Way to go, James. Congratulations.
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Lin.
Date: 2/1/2016 5:08:00 PM
James, congrats on your placement in the contest :) *smiles* -luloo
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James Inman
Date: 2/2/2016 7:57:00 AM
Sorry Laura, I've been doing silly things like this a lot lately. Anyway, thank you.

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