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Jealous Jaded Jackals

Jealous Jaded Jackals Decadent darkness placed upon the setaceous shrine For the Angels wilfully weep and ignominiously entwine The fermented fear sprouts jealous jaded jackals As Love approaches with salivating slaving shackles With vindictive vines that crushingly choke And clasping claws that piercingly poke Is it hallowed heaven or is it hollowed hell For it is only Love in a sacrificial sacculated shell. Oct.16.2016 Words Drowned In Tears Poetry - Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Constance La France

Date: 10/25/2016 6:26:00 PM

Winged congratulations on your win in my contest well done

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/25/2016 2:30:00 AM

Hi WW, This is a good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/24/2016 1:29:00 AM

this is lovely and poetically written Dear WW...jealous and love's sacrifice.... it hurts...Congrats //love, Anu:)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2016 7:05:00 PM

very good write, ^WW^ very poetic verse.. Congratulations on you win :) Hugs eve

David Smith

Date: 10/19/2016 5:38:00 AM

Glad you are still embracing your talent and letting it take you where it will. Regards David

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2016 5:01:00 PM

Wow W^^W you really have gone to town on the theme and the alliteration is fabulous:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7