Jealous

Jamming the oldies and blues Elevated by adrenaline And please remember me - over my dead body Love life because I ran away into the forest of I've-tried-my-best Oh my Word - angels are around and demons surround me at all times...I recall good times and bad times sometimes Usually on my feet all day and sleeping all night - just like an ordinary boy Shining triumphantly and feeling jealousy touch me disgracefully and so out of nowhere - no body gets it...I want more to life than this...guilt I carry with me 24/7

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 11:27:00 AM

great acrostic JW, there is more to tell.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2016 9:46:00 PM

I agree with Ruben here below. There is a quite a story behind this and seems a sad one. Anyway, I liked seeing this one. Let me go see another.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/25/2016 11:07:00 PM

Yes, it is! I am an envious type of person actually come to think of it. It's one of my horrid traits. But, my good traits are kindheartedness, I have the attitude of gratitude and I have love in my heart, despite odd hardships. Thanks for visiting my poems. Feel free to read more :)