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Jealous

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Jealous

A Black Dress simple
Gains entry to ample
Fun places of Rich
and People Beautiful.  

But careful,Naive
A glance lustful
will soon deceive.
Keep the intake
of Brain Fog
products,minimal.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2015 4:31:00 PM
    Those "brain fog products" can make a shamble of thought and reasoning. Nicely composed; certainly has a well intended touch of allegory. Why have you called this "Jealous", Kieran? Anyhow, Happy Valentines Day! Mikki

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Kieran :-) Congratulations with having your poem Featured this week. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:09:00 AM
    Lovely admonition Kieran! In search of social acceptance we often dismiss our instincts for self protection. Well written piece!

    Pavlick Avatar Kieran Pavlick
    Date: 10/29/2012 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You. Being a Great Grandfather of Five Boys, I study what the young are doing these days. Romance,Love Sex, are still the same since the beginning.