Jealous

A Black Dress simple Gains entry to ample Fun places of Rich and People Beautiful. But careful,Naive A glance lustful will soon deceive. Keep the intake of Brain Fog products,minimal.

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/14/2015 4:31:00 PM

Those "brain fog products" can make a shamble of thought and reasoning. Nicely composed; certainly has a well intended touch of allegory. Why have you called this "Jealous", Kieran? Anyhow, Happy Valentines Day! Mikki

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 7/10/2017 1:22:00 PM

I believe their are men and women who try to fit in,because they are jealous of the lifestyles of the rich and famous. It blinds them to the hazards.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 9:26:00 PM

Kieran :-) Congratulations with having your poem Featured this week. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/29/2012 5:09:00 AM

Lovely admonition Kieran! In search of social acceptance we often dismiss our instincts for self protection. Well written piece!

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 10/29/2012 11:31:00 AM

Thank You. Being a Great Grandfather of Five Boys, I study what the young are doing these days. Romance,Love Sex, are still the same since the beginning.