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Jazzy city: Punda & Pietermaai District - Curaçao Chronicle

Saxophone ripples on Smokey tunes blowing hot Sizzling flamed mood...it's jazz! Smooth notes intoxicate Swirling like Coltraine's grind, Soulful trance whips my breath... Spice of night, weekend jives! ~ Pleiades 2 Contest of Joseph May 10/15/2020

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Date: 10/17/2021 5:17:00 PM
This is a winner in my book!
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Date: 10/29/2020 9:19:00 AM
This is really good, Nette, but I checked and it's not on the winners' list! Probably it's because the title does not also start with an "S" (or the other way round....the other 7 lines don't start with a "J". Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/17/2020 10:05:00 AM
Ah, I love the way you jive dear Nette, winning wishes are being sent, and a heart prayer too. xo
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Date: 10/17/2020 4:22:00 AM
Love this pleiades Nette, what Jazz is all about, definitely a win, a really cool poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/16/2020 7:58:00 PM
this one really shines, I love it, Nette, and thanks for my win in your contest
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Date: 10/16/2020 9:33:00 AM
I love jazz. You did well. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 10/16/2020 5:23:00 AM
Your poem is in tune with the theme of the contest--I hear the melodies from the spice of the night. All the best, Nette.
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Date: 10/16/2020 4:51:00 AM
I could feel the jazz, Nette:) nicely done:)
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Date: 10/15/2020 5:21:00 PM
Very nicely written! I could sing and dance with its tune! A winner for me...
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