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Java Jonesing Blues

Quitting coffee and should it kill me Want to say that it's been fun Sidled up to this specific teat Not long after my first weaning done My body trying to clue me in As I clung to my drug of choice No longer willing to continue In stifling my tired kidney's voice Just read it slows down the flow of lymph to a toddling terrapin crawl Immunities highway like that of L.A.'s Cannot abide it you all My plan to reduce to a cup a day Followed by a day after another It's warmth will be missed the aroma as well As a weanling ripped from its mother (sob) Truthfully not looking forward to Shifting to water and herbal teas Saying goodbye to my old friend caffeine Long considered the hairy bee's knees

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Date: 10/13/2022 1:29:00 AM
Food for thought Vickey...or should that be drink for thought? :) I need a coffee around 11am each day but the rest of the time its tea - more caffeine! I must admit to fatigue and headaches and that's before any withdrawal. I believe as with any withdrawal, you have to take things slow as you've set out in your poem. Good luck! I enjoyed your poem. Cheers - Gary
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/13/2022 5:59:00 AM
Yesterday other than iced tea for lunch and dinner no caffeine .Dropped off to sleep at ten slept till one thirty and was able to go back to sleep something unheard of for me.Guess it had more of an impact on me than I thought.Thanks for the read and comment Gary.
Date: 10/11/2022 11:19:00 AM
Just sip a cup of hot water and be surprised at how easily your body adapts to your new habit...Aloha!
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/11/2022 2:34:00 PM
I will try your suggestion and thank you for sending it Rico.
Date: 10/11/2022 9:52:00 AM
You could go the slow wean route. We buy large cans of coffee and mix them 50/50, one regular, one decaf. You could gradually reduce the mix...
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/11/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for the suggestion Jeff.

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