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Jasmine's Memories

She lays still upon the night in nakedness Her body unclothed of scent She strewn them upon night wind's breast I gather from the firmanent The delicious sweetness with my nose Her soft lips beckon, I touch them Tender with the honey her tongue expose The stars all blink before her diadem O but summer turns to fall, and blues come Like Winter making wreaths of wrinkled grass The sugarcane overpowers my heart with rum Odor dripping from the night's dark flask, But still remember my jasmines white as moon And soft, so soft her tender blooms In that tenderness her vanity and my own ruin Her fragrance calls me when it glooms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2011 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week L'nass. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congrats L'Nass on being featured with "Jasmine's Memories". Vince
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:50:00 PM
Congrats L'Nass on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv....
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Date: 10/14/2010 9:26:00 AM
your way with painting these words is amazing, you entrance the reader, they follow you and the magic of your words. I loved the beginning of the second stanza, it was so familiar to my heart, and so profound. excellent work, one for the faves, thank you. --Madison
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Date: 6/29/2010 1:01:00 PM
Smile ~ Wow, you have turned into quite an erotic writer--perhaps, this is your new calling? Smile, hello my dear old beautiful and gifted friend L'nass--I hope that life has been treating you so brightly--I was on my way to the yellow brick road and saw your precious name and wanted to say hello! This is "A Beautiful Poem!!!" ~ Until we meet again, "My Love to You & Yours," John!:) ~
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Date: 6/29/2010 12:57:00 PM
You have been missed my friend....you who writes with beauty as this....one more amazing piece that takes me away! Lovely lovely work! ~ Carrie
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