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inspired by: Constance La France 

written 7/7/2023

Jasmine, yes, they're mine; so sweet on their vine. Tiny flowers fragrance that smells divine. From the ground its vine stretches, climbs, and weaves It's self-round the white trellis up to the eaves. For the moment, it enjoys the sunshine, As one twig-arm reaches upward to dine. It's glossy and deepest evergreen, leaves And white pinwheel flowers, breathless it leaves. I walk through the shadows of the petite blooms, their scent; welcome memories I greet.

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Date: 8/27/2023 9:56:00 AM
How lovely, Eve! I can sense it’s movement, smell its scent.
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Date: 7/21/2023 9:51:00 AM
Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !
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Date: 7/11/2023 12:09:00 PM
- Beautifully written ... lovely flowers with a heavenly scent, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/11/2023 6:08:00 AM
Congrats to win Jasmine is my most favourite flower with its divine fragrance. Love
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Date: 7/11/2023 2:48:00 AM
A great rhyme on Jasmine, one of the purest flowers. Congratulations!
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