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Jar of Dreams

Closed within Submerged in a bin Lay my dreams Enveloped in screams Little by little , the jar broke And the dreams spoke Replaced by a new path One that I could never follow without facing wrath Had I listened to my heart and not to you , The forgotten dreams would rise anew Alas! I was blinded by the greed An unhealthy obsession to breed For now , the jar has a different glow As fragile as the wind's blow A wrong step is all it takes For the earth to quake and your heart to ache

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/20/2016 7:13:00 PM
Arushi,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:06:00 AM
Arushi Aggarwal,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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