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January Haiku

a lot scribbled on last page of past diary next one hardcover January wind Dodging electric wires web… Kite sprang in to sky

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Date: 7/9/2014 4:27:00 PM

Hi Neelam, this is an excellent write. Congratulations on your win!

Date: 6/8/2014 11:49:00 PM

Congratulations :)

Date: 6/8/2014 9:48:00 PM

well written Haiku. Congrats Neelam. Mohan

Date: 6/8/2014 5:42:00 PM

Lovely win....Linda

Date: 6/8/2014 2:06:00 PM

A lovely pair of haiku, Neelam! Hard to choose between the two, so I put them on even par! Congrats on your win. // paul

Date: 6/8/2014 10:45:00 AM

Amazing haiku. That second one I believe is my favorite one yet!! Congrats for your win.

Date: 6/8/2014 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Neelam

Date: 6/8/2014 8:36:00 AM

NEELAM :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Date: 5/16/2014 4:52:00 AM

Enjoyed.