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January Evening

End of a celebrating season Winter not yet half gone, with mornings dark and evenings bleak Mom still clearing piles of debris from crowds that trolloped through the house, in buzz of December activity. In the kitchen, she cooks... not with the same fervor and joy, but with the necessity of a chore needing done. She can't blame the onions for her eyes. Aloneness was not loneliness in December.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/30/2009 12:19:00 PM
the combination of words and thoughts give this piece deep meaning. i can see your appathy for your mother. John H. Loving III
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:53:00 AM
Such a picture you have painted here as the words bring the subject forth to us in a person that we all know or possibly are. A wonderful well thought out write. Michael
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:35:00 AM
Yes, your message is delicately portrayed with deep emotion. Quite the lonely feeling when the holiday is over and family has left. Whatever loneliness was there before, seems amplified. Excellent poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/29/2009 10:01:00 PM
How well do I know these feelings. Excellent write. Straight to the point. Thank you for commenting on my..In a Split Second..This was a true incident that took place two years ago. But often time it feels like yesterday. One son is home and another son is still gone. Please do keep me in your prayers. I am doing well..I just have my moments.
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Date: 1/29/2009 8:28:00 PM
You have captured the feeling perfectly of these days upon us. Like Chris said the last line is great. Wonderful write, Carrie! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:48:00 PM
The last line is great. This is a special piece Carrie. I can feel this so much and each and every line was written with a purpose. Great piece.
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