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January

Eleven months' wait, Wannabee January , Youthful promising ! New resolutions, Let not winter hibernate, Must effectuate !! Two haikus- describing month of January Written on 12/5/14 Sponsor - SKAT-A

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/8/2014 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations on another well-deserved win!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/8/2014 9:51:00 PM

a fine win Upma, Congrats. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 5:54:00 PM

Nice win..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 10:52:00 AM

yours are very directly stated . I love what the first one is saying! congrats to you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 9:57:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Dr.Upma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/8/2014 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on your placement.. I do a bit of hibernating in winter.lol. BG

Theresa Stephens

Date: 6/8/2014 9:06:00 AM

Hi Dr Upma, Congrats on your placement. Loved the wording of the second Haiku in particular. All the best Theresa xx

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:38:00 AM

DR UMPA, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Heather Secrest

Date: 5/17/2014 1:35:00 PM

I have to admit January is my favorite month. Not only does it give birth to a new year, it gave birth to me. :) Great write!! ~Heather

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2014 11:06:00 AM

I like both haiku where January gives birth to a new year full of promises and resolutions. gl in contest. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Paul ! Ur good wishes hv worked n there I m to have ur wishes again !

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2014 1:19:00 PM

...and congratulations on its success, Upma !! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2014 6:15:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for visit n wishes Sara ! It really worked !

Sam Raj

Date: 5/13/2014 11:03:00 AM

Nice haiku. Promises,Seasons, resolutions, hibernate, effectuate. It's worth the wait. Thanks for sharing

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 11:32:00 AM

Thanks for ur valuable comments Sam !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2014 8:46:00 AM

hey these are pretty good. I used the hibernation theme in mine too. Not posted them yet but hopefully soon!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/13/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for passing by n the like Andrea!