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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cold and bleak is its curtain. The holiday festivities are over. Time to curl up and hibernate until spring beckons with its golden hand and floral call. Just two months to wait. One walk on a frigid, chilly morning, a white puff escapes from my blushed lips. The empty trees that border the monotonous walk gently glimmer gold in the soft surges of sunlight. The sun has her favorites: certain trees and blades of grass she places in the foreground, bathed in her beauty. The frost picks up her shine, blinding me with its sparkling reflection as if to say, "Notice me," "See me," among the still stature of a world in a state of mourning or anticipation. The month tiptoes past, consistently compared to its predecessor. It lingers as long as possible hoping to show it is worth its 31 days.

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Date: 1/22/2024 6:59:00 PM
creative insight into a humdrum month. Have a warm and pleasant evening Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/23/2024 7:14:00 AM
thanks, Jerry. I sometimes think of January as 'the Monday of months' if that makes sense. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 4:52:00 PM
Fantastic poem! Very interesting read! From etymology point view, the word January comes from Latin Ianus (“the Roman god Janus). Janus (based on Roman mythology) is the god of doorways, gates and transitions, and of beginnings and endings, having two faces looking in opposite directions. Have a very nice day ~AA
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/23/2024 7:15:00 AM
thanks for stopping by and for sharing the background on the word 'January' Appreciate you...have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 3:23:00 PM
There's nothing nice about January's weather here in NJ. Well, except for the fact that spring is just two months away (lol). Very nicely written, Sara. ~Charlie
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 3:31:00 PM
appreciate your visit, Charles. Texas winter weather isn't particularly 'nice' right now either. Icy and bitterly cold. I agree...spring is about two months away. I think I'll hibernate till then :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 12:48:00 PM
Dear Sara, I echo the sentiment of another poetic voice here. This poem is a sensory delight, so enjoyable.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:19:00 PM
thank you, Nancy. I appreciate your kind words...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 12:28:00 PM
Walking outside on a cold morning is like stepping into a realm of feeling in your poetry, dear Sara. Using vivid imagery and words like "a white puff escapes from my blushed lips," you set the scene and let readers experience the coldness. A beautiful contrast to the harsh winter scenery is depicted by the image of "empty trees that border the monotonous walk" that shimmers brightly underneath the sunshine.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:21:00 PM
thank you, kind Sotto, for your comments about my imagery and its impact on readers. I appreciate your visit...have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 12:17:00 PM
Sara my friend, your The poem then takes us on a sensory journey with a walk on a frigid morning. The use of descriptive language, such as "a white puff escapes from my blushed lips," creates a palpable atmosphere, allowing the reader to feel the chill in the air. The image of "empty trees that border the monotonous walk" gently shimmering gold in the sunlight adds a touch of beauty to the stark winter landscape.. Love it as always...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:22:00 PM
thank you, Silent One, for visiting and for commenting. I glad the descriptive language created a realistic feel to the wintry landscape I created. Grateful for your visits, have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 10:26:00 AM
I think January has showed what she is made of this year or I'm just older and cold is more unbearable. LOL..Enjoyed reading your work. Life is like a butterfly flitting here and there. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:23:00 PM
I agree, Sara K. Winter bothers me more now than when I was younger. Seems like I don't thaw out and feel warm again until March. Thanks for your visit and kind words, Sara B
Date: 1/22/2024 9:53:00 AM
So lovely, I liked the last stanza, a great way to sum it all up
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:24:00 PM
aww, thank you, Paige. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 9:11:00 AM
- January is a long month and the weather is changing ... time to sit in front of the fireplace with a good book ... and watch the snow or rain drip on the window - A wonderful poem for January, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:24:00 PM
thanks for visiting, Anne-Lise. I agree..January is a great time for self-induced hiberation--a book and a cup of hot cocoa would be just fine. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 8:59:00 AM
You've done it again. Your poem takes life's simple things and turns them into magical moments. January certainly is a long month.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:25:00 PM
aww, thank you, Hilda. I appreciate your wonderful comments. Yes, January is definitely a long month. Stay warm, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 8:03:00 AM
What a brilliant write this is dear sara. I absolutely love this, the flow of your imagery as always and the way your words are woven in such a delicate yet moving manner. I think every word woven in this would touch many souls but i must highlight this that really speaks to me in deep levels because sun sometimes i see as a metaphor for something else so this hit for me “ The sun has her favorites: certain trees and blades of grass” soul hitting! Truly and the picture fits. A fave it is
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:30:00 PM
you're most kind, Ink, and generously gracious with your comments about my imagery and the weaving of the words. I agree....the sun is a metaphor for many things depending upon the context. I'm grateful my poem spoke to your soul. I appreciate your enthusiasm and the fave...wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 6:28:00 AM
Delicately expressed, a pleasure
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:26:00 PM
thank you, Matt...appreciate your visit and your comments. have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 5:20:00 AM
Enchanting wintertide poem, dear Sara. I recall my January walks on Long Island after ice storms. You've penned this exquisitely. Hugs xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:27:00 PM
thank you, Regina...I bet the January walks on Long Island are much colder than the ones I experience here in North Texas. Thanks for your visit and comments, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/22/2024 5:12:00 AM
Can be a bitter month for sure Sara, had a bad storm in the uk yesterday, wreaked havoc in its wake. Thankfully I wasn't affected, watched from indoors. Roll on spring. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/22/2024 2:28:00 PM
we barely missed a 2d ice storm here in North Texas....whew. Glad you weren't impacted with the recent storm in the UK...yes, roll on spring, roll on!

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