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Jan 26 77 Evening and Dawning

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just one of those days

The flowing fire of day Melted into the night High o'er head the moon was out Showing only half its light. Dates made before this moment Kept past their passing Each a gem concentrically strung On threads of fragmentary Nows , Waiting to meet their weaver.

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Date: 12/9/2015 12:11:00 PM
I like "The threads of fragmentary nows? Congrats. daver
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:17:00 PM
So expressive, Jan . Really enjoyed it!
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