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James

Night has kept me bound to him; With chains of steel, brought guilt He's cast a blanket over me And has smothered 'til I'd wilt. He wriggled 'til he got inside, And from there consumed my life. He broke and cut and scarred within With hate and bitter strife. Night had kept me bound to him And held me close with darkest spite. For years and years, he'd smothered me, But these moments are his last, tonight. For morning sun has lifted high, And light has scattered free; For love at last has broke through night And he will be the life in me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/4/2023 11:50:00 PM
When one scathes one uv mine, mine fists become iron, mine feet the Pb and atomic number 82(lead)...please do not give up yourn unique....i don't comment much, but i read ya girlie...get that quill slidding...please ;) much love, james
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Date: 9/29/2012 9:25:00 PM
WOW!! Does he know u wrote this about him?...Very nice metaphors...
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Dana Smith
Date: 9/30/2012 5:51:00 PM
Yes, but he doesn't really like poetry, so he doesn't really care for any of the poems I write for him lol. Like my latest one that won. =l
Date: 7/2/2012 6:20:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this expressive work from your gifted pen.I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:09:00 PM
I feel we need to discuss this... :o)
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:55:00 PM
great write Dana',love your style
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful, simply beautiful write! I really enjoyed your creative write Dana'lynn! Great work!!
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