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Jaded

anticipation always exceeds reality water flows downhill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/21/2016 3:18:00 PM
Wonderful imagery I can see. excellent condensation.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/21/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Iris
Date: 11/20/2015 7:59:00 PM
excellent haiku!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/21/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 9/16/2015 8:03:00 AM
It's a bummer, but it's true, I like it :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 9/16/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, I may change the title to "jaded"

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