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Below is the poem entitled JADED which was written by poet IRIS GONZAL. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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So badly. So desperately.
So sure. So achingly.
So ready. So complete.
Jaded is what I was

You were hurting. I was pleading.
You were unsure. I was in pain
You took the chance. I was tripping
Jaded is what I was

You looked alive. I felt we survived
You started to shiver. I felt a quiver.
You looked at me. I saw you.
Jaded is what we were.

I shook beside you. You begged for more.
I gave it to you. You had pain no core.
I watched you relax. You kissed my mind.
Jaded we were not. Gone is what we got.

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Hello Iris, A nice little LATE and warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I noticed this is your first poem. -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Not bad for being your first poem . I enjoyed the read. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you like to write - keep writing. God bless. Lucilla