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Jack's Pact

Jack's Pact There once was a pirate named Jack, Who struck with the devil a pact. But when his accord He could not afford The devil took Jack and his pack! The moral of Jack and his pack Is clear: Give the devil No pact! If you can't afford To strike an accord Hold fast what you have--not your lack! deborah burch© 05/08/2012

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 12:53:00 AM

great limericks, and good advice. good luck. harry

Joseph May

Date: 5/13/2012 6:05:00 PM

very nice limerick Deb...always..Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2012 5:44:00 PM

Cute one..Good lesson that you have taught..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2012 9:51:00 AM

GREAT advice in your fun limerick. Good luck in the contest, sweetie.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 1:28:00 PM

lol, thank you Andrea...your encouragement is so helpful and means a great deal to me! Big Congrats on all your fab wins, girl!! Awsome job!! love ya , deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2012 5:21:00 PM

cute one Deborah... winners list posted and my book is being edited right now .. needed to add 20 more poems to content .. will let u know when fully available probably late Summer or early Fall... see my latest post and come visit me at WN..luv..

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/12/2012 1:25:00 PM

Thank you LindaMarie :) miss you!! thanks for my win!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !! hope to see you soon on WN look for Annabellee ;) big hugs love ya deb