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Jack's In Trouble

Jack's In Trouble by Country Girl46 Jack and Jill went up the hill To get a couple pails of water Jill bent down to tie her shoes Jack looked down her halter He smacked her in the ass She turned around in a flash Then smacked him in the face Gave his neck a whiplash Jack quickly ran down the hill Jill made him feel like a fool But Jack did learn one thing What he did to Jill wasn't cool Jill slowly walked home, for she was really mad. When she finally got home, she went and told her dad. Let's just say Jack never touched her ever again since that day Jill he definitely stayed away Felt very hurt and betrayed. © Melanie . All rights reserved, 7 hours ago

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Date: 10/19/2014 4:34:00 AM
I could not control my laughter. What a piece Melanie ! Poor Jack ass! )))::: rajat
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Date: 10/19/2014 4:43:00 AM
sorry misspelled your name. this darn phone and automatic spelling
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Country Girl48
Date: 10/19/2014 4:42:00 AM
Rabat, you will have to be sure and read Jack and Jill's mistake and the three pigs

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