Jack's Harem

Day one without our lim'rick dad It's cloudy and I feel quite sad I sneak in his room Try on his perfume and call his harem to come to his pad

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David Meade

Date: 5/9/2015 5:35:00 PM

I wonder . . . was it Chanel N°5 -- Jack is such a Brut kind of guy!! a Harem indeed!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2015 3:57:00 PM

I posted a limerick today Tim - keep the limerick fun going for dear Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/9/2015 1:57:00 PM

lol! a limerick worthy of the young gun...7 for you! :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/9/2015 9:47:00 AM

LOL I was smiling when I saw the title... I have'nt been around lately, so have missed his writings... I can understand how you must be feeling:)... wishing you a nice weekend.. Nadiya.

Nandita Das

Date: 5/9/2015 9:26:00 AM

Hahaha...nice one.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/9/2015 10:21:00 AM

thanks Nan....I have to get the dictionary out for the next one...in Jacko's honour

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2015 9:02:00 AM

- A cool one, Tim - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/9/2015 10:20:00 AM

Thanks A-L...have a beautiful weekend

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/9/2015 8:53:00 AM

I miss our Santa too Tim...Sweet limerick : )

Tim Smith
Date: 5/9/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks sweet Charmaine as Jack would say : )