Jackpot

I dreamt of numbers on jackpot tracks Sold my watch to buy hundreds of bucks For gooey lotto dream spin And proclaimed I was all in... Won five bonus dollars, boy that sucks! © . . . Contest: Susan Burch’s Lottery Ticket Limerick

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 8:11:00 PM

Congrats, nette. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/16/2012 3:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2012 7:48:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win..David

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/16/2012 7:13:00 AM

congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 10:52:00 PM

NETTE,, a wonderful win in Susan's contest ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours one and only,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 4:18:00 PM

yeah, a few bucks for spending hundreds. That's the way the ball bounces!! Congrats, Nette.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/15/2012 2:29:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your win. Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2012 12:45:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on fabulous fifth place win with awesome lottery Limerick.. did not get your s.m. ????

James Fraser

Date: 1/14/2012 9:33:00 AM

Many speculate to accumulate Princess Nette, and many fail to achieve this. Koolio Limerick, good luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend, and thank you for your congrats on "Inlets & Islands" :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 10:40:00 PM

haha, that's the way it goes too, Nette. Good luck in the contest. She has many good entries to judge!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/11/2012 11:32:00 AM

Beautiful sucks, loved the bonus dollars. bl

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/11/2012 8:22:00 AM

An excellent write, jag

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/11/2012 6:29:00 AM

The gamblers bowl of tears- so funny Nette- love, brenda

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/11/2012 4:15:00 AM

Ha, ha now that's funny! You thought my poem was funny, now this poem is really it! Spending hundreds of dollars just to win five dollars! Now that's the jackpot! I know all about that bad luck! I've never been a lucky man! Oh well! Great Work!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2012 3:01:00 AM

Lottery tickets are the biggest betting long shots anybody can take. That is why groups of people (usually co-workers) pool their money and buy large numbers of tickets. If they have a winner, they split the amount evenly among themselves. Good limerick.

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 1/11/2012 1:57:00 AM

Thanks for commenting in my poem.A nice poem by you and best of luck for the contest..........spandan.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/11/2012 1:25:00 AM

i was thinking of doin somethin like this dream using thing....well done here:) quirky end tch tch

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2012 1:23:00 AM

Very nice Limerick Nette...enjoyed.Best wishes in the contest.