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I am Jack and I live on a farm, was born in the barn one of many; oh, I am the only cat with charm, but my best friend is the horse- Penny. Was born in the barn . . . one of many, oh, I like all of the farm creatures; but my best friend is- the horse Penny, like all here no matter their features. Oh, I like all of the farm . . . creatures, there is a bully of a rooster; like all here . . . no matter their features, even like big bird we call Brewster. There is a BULLY of a rooster, oh, I am the only cat- with charm; even like . . . big bird we call Brewster, I am Jack and I live- on a farm. ______________________ April 10, 2020 Poetry/Pantoum/Personification/ Jack the Cat Copyright Protected, ID 20-1242-876-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Pantoum Personification sponsor, Eve Roper, Inspiration is Image #2 Third Place

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/13/2020 1:30:00 PM

Hello Dear heart, the picture is so cute. it made me smile. The poem is cute to. I am making this my fav. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2020 8:29:00 AM

Hello Daer herat, This poem made me smile. That cat really shoes llove for the horse. So cute. Enjoy your day my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:20:00 PM

Darlene, thanks for the FAV and the comment, appreciate _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2020 10:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:18:00 AM

Thanks for my placement, appreciate _Constance

John Watt

Date: 5/9/2020 6:09:00 PM

I can totally see why you would fall in love with the kitty gif... enjoyed your farm -centric rendition of this unusual pairing; the cat going down the list of the other animals, very cute and clever. Congrats and hugs ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:19:00 AM

John, thanks for the visit, the congrats and the great comment, appreciate _Constance

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/12/2020 5:29:00 PM

Must agree with the comments, lyrical with a certain magical quality. 'I am Jack and I live on a farm, was born in the barn one of many; oh, I am the only cat with charm,'. And that video is the cat's pajamas. Wonderful Pantoum _Constance. -Richard

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2020 6:50:00 PM

Richard, thanks for the great comment and compliment on my poem, appreciate -Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2020 10:34:00 AM

absolutely charming Constance!:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2020 2:54:00 PM

Jan, thanks for visiting, I absolutely loved that image and thanks for the hugs _Constance

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/10/2020 6:46:00 PM

Hello Dear Heart … very lyrical indeed. I could see your verse sung to children who I believe would love to listen to - thanks Dear Heart - Lindsay

Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2020 2:56:00 PM

Lindsay, thanks for visiting, yes, I think it would make a nice story for a child, Jack the cat on the farm, oh he could have all kinds of adventures _Constance