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Jack Frost

Jack slide across the slippery ice to land on his… Ass frozen like an icicle in the dead of winter… Calling out “help me, help me!” Kicking his body every which way he… Falls yet again on the cold marble floor… of glass… Rolling and spinning he tumbles steadily toward the edge… Of the glistening mirror staring back at him… Singing a chorus of “Ouch, ouch, ouch” he… Takes a deep breath and finally reaches… the towering…snowbank! December 7th 2015 For the contest: “Acrostic: Jack Frost”

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Date: 3/12/2016 10:34:00 AM
Meg, ha, Love the imagery and rolling of snow. LINDA
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Date: 12/12/2015 3:20:00 PM
MEG, Congratulations on your Jack Frost Acrostic. Love SKAT
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/14/2015 9:21:00 AM
Skat A, thanks!
Date: 12/11/2015 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Meg.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/11/2015 5:15:00 PM
Awe thanks so much
Date: 12/9/2015 10:01:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic Meg.. congrats on great win!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/11/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thank you. I had fun writing this one.
Date: 12/9/2015 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Meg, this is so cute! That would be me on that ice hollering “Ouch, ouch, ouch”!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/9/2015 6:34:00 PM
Awe thank you!
Date: 12/9/2015 10:06:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Meg:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/9/2015 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 12/8/2015 8:47:00 AM
I was smiling as I read your words . . . it put my imagination in overtime -- I have taken a fall or two myself!!
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:06:00 PM
Awe...Yes I have been known for falling quite a bit. lol
Date: 12/7/2015 12:16:00 PM
Made me giggle Meg - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:43:00 PM
Jan, Thankyou! It was fun to write a different kind of poem. I don't normally write funny ones.

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