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Jack-O-Lantern - Fulton

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/29/2009 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Trudy! The imagery in this is perfect. I lve Halloween and all the fun decorations, especially the Jack-o-lanterns! Thank you for your kind words. Even though I get depressed I have too much faith and fight to give up. :) Love, Robin
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Date: 1/11/2009 10:58:00 AM
Like this style and really seems easy but it really takes alot of energy to do this. enjoyed reading it have a great day.
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Date: 11/25/2008 2:31:00 PM
Great Fulton, Trudy, and with a perfect title that adds to the overall effect and imagery. Nice work! Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/25/2008 10:35:00 AM
Enjoyed this ... striking out in different directions I see. Good for you! And, while I'm here, thank you for your comment on my featured poem, and the same back at you! ~Mom
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Date: 11/20/2008 12:06:00 PM
What an uplifting use of the concise form. Made me smile. Nice job! I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:26:00 AM
Welcome to premium, Trudy. Enjoyed this little seasonal jewel. Love, daver
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Date: 10/15/2008 9:39:00 PM
hahaha! A worthy piece for Jack! I wonder how you'll do this to another Jack (Frost)... Just guessin out loud dear hehe! Brgds. The Olongapoet
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Date: 10/15/2008 8:43:00 PM
Certainly the imagery jumps right out in from of the readers face. This is very vivid and the words flow very well. I like the topography of the piece and its impact. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/14/2008 5:31:00 AM
I'm not familiar with the form, but the read is great as it flows and is clear and the form seems to be ascetically pleasing. Michael
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:52:00 PM
Trudy very nice write. God bless Michael
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Date: 10/13/2008 1:07:00 PM
I've never tried this. Sounds like fun. Good luck. Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 6:24:00 AM
Awesome girlfriend! This is so clever and reads like a winner to me! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:09:00 AM
yo trudy dude, cool write dude! Rock on man ;)
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Date: 10/13/2008 12:10:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Trudy and for the honour bestowed that you entered my latest contest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/12/2008 6:49:00 PM
Great job on this fulton, Trudy!! I can see this guy sitting out on my porch all lit up!! ~ Carrie
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