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Izzy You'Re Dizzy

Izzy you're dizzy you'll need to explain Exactly HOW many players are in your brain. ~But I can't they won't understand. ~I've tried this before and I lost my clan. ~They know you're here on the land.Anyway. Explain a day that you can see when Many are the here and the hear are She. Writing for A WE. It can be This Way and it is. News came and spun the biz... NessV. It'll be May.be Tomorrow. Five days in the narrows. row row To be. a Way Then on the arrows we'll see. ~with respect I ask... are you testing me? A day in May is only part Way. To a day. I know my name. \@@/ and YOU're the ham. A birth defined on an August I AM!g0 And my vision is funny not fuzzy, Souper sunny in the morning not dizzy... My name is Susan and my pen's named Izzy. A system drawn in a perfect way.see A Wake.yes. A Long ago yes. I Be. 8> Loving to write poETry And how many poems can that really be? In my brain I asked, Again.

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Date: 11/23/2009 3:58:00 PM
Ye Izzy, now I am dizzy, from looking for your featured poem"Darkness". Congrats. This poem will certainly do, it's hallo ba lou, makes me wonder about yo. Smile! How many did you say were in there, with you, oh yea, I see, you didn't know which one was you. Just yell fire and see which one comes out. Oh well anyway, Sincere, Love, Moses This has got to be your best one yet.
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Date: 5/25/2009 4:28:00 AM
It is funny, I find your write so original and fresh ... and behind the sprite I see a mystic seriousness, the archetype reaching for jubilee
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:47:00 AM
izzy i think the world would be alot better if we all were a bit more d(izzy).
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Date: 5/20/2009 3:41:00 PM
Izzy I loved the title and the poem - Original all the way - I love that - Hey don't trip about the comment thing ok - I'm not the type who would let such a small mistake change the beauty of my day so to speak - All is take as it was meant - Respectfully - I'll put this in my favs I do believe - Have a wonderful day ok - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:40:00 PM
Oh thanks everyone! I do appreciate the comments and Deborah, honey, there is never any logic with me :) It's lovely really. lol.
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:37:00 PM
goodness such a blither, you put me in a dither Light & Love & a bit more logic?? gah! me asking for logic (duck)
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:22:00 AM
You make me dizzy Mr.Izzy. I like your zany side. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem also. I really appreciate it. It's strange how writing a poem helps you purge some of the pain.
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:39:00 AM
Susan? Meow?
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Date: 5/19/2009 9:27:00 PM
Is this a riddle... I was born in Aug. and in the morning... I like your style.. I will keep up when I can... I am a busy man now days... It seems I am writing for everyone.. Your friend in poetry JackReed3...
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:57:00 PM
Izzy, you have a fresh creative spin on your fun poems.
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