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the fire an awful splendour in sapphire sky - then the towers were gone

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/18/2018 5:43:00 PM

Geoffrey,like your monoku poem.Have a nice evening

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:34:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Geoffrey - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 1:31:00 PM

Thanks and good wishes for 2018, Gregory.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Geoffrey, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 1:30:00 PM

Warm thanks, Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/2/2018 5:48:00 PM

A fantastic title and a stunning monoku Geoffrey. Brilliant.. Congratulations on your win.. ~Susan

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comments, Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 10:25:00 AM

Lump in the throat type of powerful ! Congrats on your win, Geoffrey.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/5/2018 1:25:00 PM

Merci beacoup, Line.

John Lawless

Date: 1/2/2018 7:38:00 AM

Geoffrey, this one stopped me in my tracks. I didn't catch the title until after I had read the Monoku.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/2/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thanks John. Glad you spotted it.

Maria Williams

Date: 1/2/2018 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the Winners List Geoffrey. Excellent Monoku...Maria

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/2/2018 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Maria.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:35:00 PM

WOwowoW, THIS IS AMAZING. Indeed it was this way. This one for me, is a chart topper. Congrats on the winners list. FAVE

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/1/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I am truly honoured by a high flying Souper

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:57:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/1/2018 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine.

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:29:00 PM

Great one liner Geoffrey..Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. This was supposed to be 2nd not 3rd. Let me go see if I can fix it.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/1/2018 4:42:00 PM

Many thanks, Silent One