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I'Ve Fallen Down

I have fallen down Please help me get up again My soul hurts so much Do you see I’m bruised inside Getting up is what heals most
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/7/2012 10:56:00 PM
Yup... Russell, getting up,, feels good..... have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
impressive lines Russell .. so profound an image of a bruised soul seeking renewal and release ... last line is most important of all.. getting up is the answer luv.. excellent..today.
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Date: 4/7/2012 7:05:00 AM
very touching tanka, my friend.
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