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brother's marked tombstone, honoring thy name Tribute To Armed Forces And Those Fallen From Wars R.I.P. Note I Did Not Lose A Brother To War But Brother And Myself Did Serve Him A Marine And Me For Army But Sadly Enough Others Did Fall In The Line Of Duty Also This Is My Entry For Raul Moreno's Six Word Masterpieces Epigram Contest

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Date: 12/28/2009 12:13:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment Katherine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/26/2009 10:27:00 AM
This is a wonderful tribute to the fallen of war. These six words are full of raw emotion and you honour them by writing them...
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful tribute poem Katherine and please know how much we truly appreciate your services and your brother's to keep us safe and free... all day yesterday the TV kept showing messages from the troops all over the World and overseas too.. and it was beautiful but sad they were away from their families on Christmas Day.. your poem is deeply touching... thankxxx for sharing this memento..blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie.. a prosperous New Year 2010
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Date: 12/23/2009 4:31:00 PM
Thoughtful and thought provoking poem. What a wonderful tribute. Good luck in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas my friend. Karen
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Katherine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 10:58:00 PM
Awesome write! Good luck on Raul's contest. Caroline.
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Date: 12/19/2009 9:43:00 AM
A very moving epigram, Katherine! And tribute to our fallen heroes is well deserved. Thank you and your brother for serving in our military. The time you sacrified to defend our country is appreciated. God bless you this holiday season. Love, Carolyn
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