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I'Ve Come Back From Worse

Your mind is just benevolent This feeling it seems heaven sent You are where the sunshine went when ya left me with my ego bent I swear that i've come back from worse Jumped out that back of the moving hearse This world has felt rough to me but owes me no apology i got it straight now i think i should know how to deal with what is happening whats happened and what the future brings im realizing opporunity slowly setting my mind free i'll come back stonger than before i'll crash my ship upon the shore i'll hold on tight and jump from the deck i'll srutt my stuff away from the wreck i'll snatch the gold with expert's ease and drag the chest through the oceans breeze i'll walk through waves with false attempts to knock me off the course i've spent far too long trying to stick by and dealing with overcast skies but to that feeling i've said my goodbyes i've planned my whats and explained my whys i've forgotten all my allabies but i never will forget those eyes

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Date: 5/13/2014 1:14:00 PM
Deep words of thought...if not for the " crap " in life, the " sweet " would never be relished...and life would be a bore ! well put....
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Eric Schojan
Date: 5/13/2014 4:02:00 PM
SOOOO VERY TRUE!! poets like ourselves would have nothing interesting to share with each other and others :) there can be a positive to everything if you look hard enough :) thank you for reading my write KJ it is much appreciated!
Date: 5/11/2014 11:51:00 AM
well you know they write themselves, I like what you write, little rhyming stories about what is in your life and head, let words fall where they may,
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:22:00 AM
you had some nice turns in there, and change directions while rhyming, the last line was a nice surprise. NICE SET UP,
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Eric Schojan
Date: 5/11/2014 11:28:00 AM
thank you!! :) I was hoping it didnt seem like I jumped around too much but I felt like it was a benefit to the meaning and purpose and I was the most proud of that line :)) thanks again cynthia!

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