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It's the Night Before Christmas

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Presents piled beneath the tree all are wrapped so skillfully Santa’s bringing me a pup how will Santa wrap him up! November or December Quatrain Poem Poetry Contest Rhyme scheme AABB Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 11/18/21

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/21/2021 9:25:00 AM

Oh this is sooooooooooooo cute my friend. Hope you do get a puppy for Christmas! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/21/2021 2:04:00 AM

Very nice indeed...Delice

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/20/2021 8:05:00 PM

Hello Jan ... hope there's a nappy on the pup - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/20/2021 5:07:00 PM

Jan, This is cute! The picture is priceless! Good luck in the contest! Blessing~ Debbie

Jack Horne

Date: 11/20/2021 12:17:00 PM

LOL, such a cute one here : )

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/19/2021 10:08:00 AM

I hope his elves warned him it is, "Pup-pee" . . . . . .

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:44:00 PM

lol you are so funny Rico:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/19/2021 4:29:00 AM

This is just adorable Jan! Clever and cuddly, Happy Friday xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:44:00 PM

aww thanks xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 11/19/2021 4:25:00 AM

I can't imagine how Santa will wrap up the pup, but I'm sure he will have one heck of a ruff ruff time doing it. Love this, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:43:00 PM

lol at ruff time xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 11/18/2021 11:02:00 PM

That's a question that requires an answer :) Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:43:00 PM

One that will never happen in my house lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George

Date: 11/18/2021 9:12:00 PM

This is so cute ! Hope the pupply won't jump off Santa's sleigh !

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:43:00 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/18/2021 8:17:00 PM

He'll put him in a loving cup! Season's best, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:42:00 PM

cute comment gw :-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/18/2021 6:44:00 PM

Jan, you've chosen an adorable subject that is guaranteed to win the affections of readers and jurors everywhere. The final line is just unique.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:42:00 PM

It was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2021 4:42:00 PM

A lovely present and nicely wrapped up too..

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thanks Joseph, :-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2021 3:35:00 PM

You chose a cute and cuddly theme, Jan that is sure to win readers' ( and judge's) hearts. The ending line is brilliant.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2021 12:41:00 PM

I hope Caren likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/18/2021 3:00:00 PM

Would love to see the kids faces on Christmas morning. Love the pic with it. Glad you're over the worst Jan, it's raging in Europe at the moment, Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 3:14:00 PM

Looks like its here to stay:-( just hope the tiredness eases I have read it takes 2 - 3 weeks or longer, hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2021 1:54:00 PM

Oh, Jan, I love this verse.. I hope Caren Likes it. Hugs dear friend hope you are doing better. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 2:11:00 PM

Thanks Eve I'm very tired but starting to begin to write a little now:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/18/2021 1:12:00 PM

an adorable poem with the perfect picture to match! good luck in the contest, jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 1:14:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I've shortened the lines from my original idea but I think this works well:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/18/2021 1:00:00 PM

Poor little pup, Santa sure has his work cut out, very cute indeed, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 1:14:00 PM

I wrote the poem when I was ill, only one of 2 in about 12 days, but didnt have the inclination to even log on the site till yesterday, hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2021 12:52:00 PM

Really cute!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 1:13:00 PM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/18/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hello Jan, I think the pup is already wrapped up. the lucky person that receive this gifts. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/19/2021 11:45:00 AM

Hello Jan, well I hope that person will get his or her puppy. I would like to have a cat not for Christmas. But i would like to have one. A female. Hugs. Darlene xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thanks Darlene its pure fiction for me but i know someone who is eagerly awaiting a new pup for Christmas:-) hugs jan xx