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A million kisses To the Moon A thousand toasts Of Summer wine A hundred hugs To May and June And as many pats (as you’ll allow me) Upon your fine behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/17/2013 3:51:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem and the cheeky ending....no pun intended....brought a smile to my face.
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Date: 5/8/2013 5:41:00 PM
I'm turned the other way. Pat all you may. lol. Nice one, David. :)
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 5/15/2013 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you Delysia!
Date: 5/7/2013 10:20:00 PM
Just beautiful
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 5/15/2013 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Lefffette, for seeing beauty in this! (and for not thinking it crass) Appreciate ya'

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