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Its Simple They Tell Me

It's Simple they tell me: but when I saw you I was in turmoil inside. you moved across the ballroom as if it were yours. the emerald of your dress, the fire of hair made a desolation in me. Its Simple they tell me: Women, they say, just women. But when I saw you I near cried out. ..... and then we talked, talked so many things that made me ache and made me sharply draw my breath and in this all a turn of head, was a glory unexpected. Its Simple they tell me.

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Date: 12/11/2013 3:17:00 PM
Not so simple my friend, i can remember my first approach to a pretty woman, man i was a puddle, but it paid off being bold, nice write, blessings Carl
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