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It's Safe To Cry In the Shower

I can show my pain I can shed my tears Watch it go down the drain While exploiting my fears My eyes so red My throat so tight Wishing I was dead The urge I fight I emerge from my tomb Into a dim cold room The hot steam chased away The depression of the day No one will ever know What exactly I face While standing under the flow Of God's given grace I can fight the tide I'll fail when I fly And I still have to ride But I can still cry *Written on May 5, 2012*

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Date: 6/12/2017 2:35:00 PM
A very sad but good poem, it s natural for anyone who don t wantes the world to know, I m exactly like this, but instead of taking shower i prefer to stand infront of mirror in my washroom, or cry after going to my brd so that no one ever knew about it and no one ever knew that I cried, but it isn t good to cry too often, you do need someone to share your grief with however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and tell me how you feel about it
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:09:00 AM
so sad and sensitive, I have been there, this was beautifully written , looking forward to reading more of your work
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Date: 5/6/2012 9:59:00 AM
Very nice with your emotion.
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:52:00 PM
Nicely expressed feelings in this poem.Very nice flow.Your name is very cute.
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