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Its Over

A certain peace that comes with giving up Raw edges can start to heal Only wishes remain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2010 11:37:00 AM
broken wishes. jhl
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:46:00 PM
I got it. It's a post-Haiku poetic form, consisting of three lines of 10, 7 and 6 syllables - invented in Israel. Thanks Barbara. I would like to try it
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:39:00 PM
The form is something new to me too. Interesting write
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:51:00 PM
Barbara~ A well written very interesting perspective here! I loved it! Laura :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:39:00 PM
Interesting write..I will have to look up the Form..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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