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It's Over

You, Holding, Another woman's, Hand. Kissing, Her, Upon, Her cheek. Don't, Think, I, Don't know. I've, Been, Watching, From a far. Whispering, In her, Ear, Like you once did to me. You, Cheated, You, Lied. Now you, Got to, Pay, The price. It's, Over, For, You and me. Thats it, No, More, Of our history. You, Broke my, Heart, Into two. Now, I have, To, Leave you. Goodbye, Forever, I guess, We weren't, Ment together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/28/2009 4:51:00 PM
I know what you are going through. Good poem, releasing your anger and pain in your writings. keep up the good work. Steven
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Date: 9/4/2008 10:41:00 AM
it's the bravest of us that can realy go through with it. did you or are these just words? jhl
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Date: 9/3/2008 11:45:00 AM
I totally know what you are/were feeling. I've felt that pain before and it is awful. but your poem was awesome. Steven
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Date: 9/1/2008 12:42:00 PM
hi Becky, I don't know if this is inspired of recent events or not, but I am sorry for what you are going through, in this write I can feel the raw sense of pain and passion, great write, take care D-nyce
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