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It's Now Just a House

The darkness of this quiet house scares me No more, do I even hear it settling As if remnants or reminders of loud steps No more is there light within the rooms The doors stay shut unless I, alone, open them For they no longer slam with eagerness or anger But rather hang in loneliness as barriers From entering within the confines of the past The feeling of a home no longer resonates From within the walls now pale in color As torn draperies cling to their last life In an effort to catch one final breeze I close the door behind me as I turn to say My farewells to the home of my youth Where memory’s keepsakes relocate To the vacant edges within my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/2/2008 12:57:00 AM
Like the last line imagery Michael.Excellen writing as always.Rgds Brian & thanks for welcome observations
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Date: 8/1/2008 6:30:00 PM
Whether it was a castle or a tent, home is home and it holds special memories for each of us. I liked this one. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/1/2008 10:21:00 AM
yes last month i went to the house that i grew up in. my brother is selling the house he moved last november. this was the first that i had seen the house empty. a lot of memories there. the house is in des moines iowa, and my wife does not want to move back there or i would buy it. but your poem really touched me and brought back some memories. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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Date: 8/1/2008 6:55:00 AM
Michael, this nicely conveys that feeling one has when returning to a place that no longer has the function it has in one's memory.
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Date: 8/1/2008 6:30:00 AM
Michael, this is very well written, It reminds me of the tanka I wrote about the old 1700's house - such alure to old homes, all they have seen and heard, and the sadness that resonates loudly within empty walls...beautiful in its sadness...well done, my friend. Kristin XO
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