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It's In Our Jeans

In beautiful and well stretched blue jeans, we walked
Accompanied by perfectly charming shirts
Smiles infect as our fingers locked and sway
Through the pavement to the dance hall
Where glimmering colorfully fragmented lights
Acknowledged our presence
And ordered the best beat of the year
As we bend to answer the call of melody
Wonderfully carved waist freezed all sights
As it gradually moves, all eyes move
I held her close and whispered
Your dress is the best
She replied "Yours is amazing"

Author: Joseph Osita
For Nette's contest:” It’s in the jeans"

Copyright © Joseph Osita

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  1. Date: 7/18/2011 5:12:00 AM
    hi joesph.. been a while!..could i ask a favor?.. kindly comment on my latest poem called " chapter seven.".. i'm getting sytem errors for hours and would just want to know if there is a server problem here.. thanks loads!.. i can't reply to others as well:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 5:42:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 6:01:00 PM
    congratulations Joseph

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 1:46:00 PM
    Congrats Joseph on your win in nette's contest with this very sweet write..gautami

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 10:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 10:15:00 AM
    Very nice, Joseph. Like the sensual nature of your poem very much. Really sets a romantic mood. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 6:46:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 12:37:00 AM
    Lovely poem Joseph...Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 9:56:00 PM
    Two in love and wearing blue jeans. Sounds wonderful, Joseph! Congrats on the winners' list!

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 8:45:00 PM
    Congrats Joseph on your super win in the jeans contest with this perfect entry luv..