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It's Dark

It's dark Hearing the whispering of the rains Not knowing whom is around one Each drop feels the listening's pains Trickle drip drip allowing it's sound It's dark, it must be somewhere near Not knowing whom is around one Each drop feels the listening's fear Drip drip, trinkle, now becomes aloud Whilst the listening's pains now soar One feels it's now the canopy of stark It must be somewhere near, it's dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/20/2018 6:13:00 PM
I love your poem, James, I love the sound of the rain, but for the life of me the the sound of thunder just scares me ... this from an old woman.. I just haven't grown out of it... Congratulations to you and Olive on your new arrival ..
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Date: 8/18/2018 2:35:00 AM
Dark indeed, I like how you did this!
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James Fraser
Date: 8/18/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you kindly Arthur :)

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