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It's A Winter Colder Than The Others

It's a winter colder that the others we lived yesterday, never thinking of any sadness; our winters were mild and we wanted snow to hug each other closer and watch it fall! It remained a wish we made by an open window: wasn't the quite evening a vivid recall? I stand outside frozen as a lonely snowman and wait for your warm kiss to melt it away, we can build our castle and be happy; nothing went as we had planned, what an unpleasant setback to realize the many tries that failed twice... and again we laugh and pretend as if no wish has ever changed! It's a winter colder than the others, loneliness makes one cry, closeness sends away all blues piled up inside; ice to melt needs lots of sun, renew my joy and begin to run: your hug can give me back all pride! I haven't loved anybody or promised to stay with someone anyhow; I'm running to you to feel alive and worthy; not staring at the unhappy moon, and hear wanderers that swoon! Isn't my wish to spend the starriest night listening to the silence around, hearing only you sighing upon my chest and be forever heavenly-bound? It's a winter colder that the others, never ask me to stop kissing you passionately, never deny me the need to fulfill me completely; I'll make you my queen, the happiest woman who I have ever loved with desire and passion: I want nothing but your faithfulness!

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Date: 1/20/2024 4:49:00 PM
Hello Andrew, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of longing, love, and the warmth that defies the chill of life. Each verse is a delicate dance of emotions, painting a vivid picture of winter's cold yet the promise of a love that can melt even the loneliest snowman. Your words say that amidst the frost, there is a sanctuary in the embrace of those we hold dear. Bravo on crafting such a heartfelt piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/20/2024 12:40:00 PM
Hello Andrew Crisci, It is cold here. The wind has a chill. Loneliness is what i feel. Winter is colder than usual. I long for Spring. Enjoy your weekend. my friend. /Darlene/.
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