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It'Ll Be a Goodnight

Leaned up against the window i pray, please don't let me leave this day tears streaming down my face i shake. Even the strongest tend to break, leaned up against the window i pray this emptiness taints my smile leaned up against the window i pray i contemplate my life goals all this pain is taking toll leaned up against the window i pray wiping away tears on my face my mouth is filled with a metallic taste leaned up against the window i pray tears streaming down my face i shake as i look out into the moonlight i know soon it'll be a goodnight.

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Skat A

Date: 6/2/2016 12:25:00 AM

nice to see this one again, LISa...skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 8:27:00 AM

Hi Lisa, , well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2014 5:13:00 AM

a very warm write, Lisa , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Skat

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2014 4:40:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lisa- I choose your first beautiful poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)