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It Will Rain

the river will flow through the plains, through the plateaus and valleys, making gorges and waterfalls, in to the ocean it will wane, then it will rain. where may you go but with the slope, through the valleys of fears and hope, you may not win yet you may cope, with seemingly endless pain, then it will rain. one lost man may steal and rob, and cheat his way through the pain, colored red with a brothers loss, will remain all of his gain, then it will rain. why do you wander so rattled and weary, let not the dream be ever more scary, than the momentary burden you carry, till the thirst overcomes your pain, then it will rain. then it will rain, and wash away all the gains and loss, and you will see the pleasure and plight, the redness of blood, the yellow of light, in the brightness of ever blinking stars, turning to dust all, that was lost in the way, already the clouds, are turning grey, I can feel the moist drops, Seeping through my pain, it will rain.

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Date: 8/15/2016 12:47:00 AM
Shivendra, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/14/2016 11:27:00 PM
Shibendra , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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