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It Was On

I was walking down the street with confidence The day my foot fell off At first I thought it was a joke But it turned and Had its shoe stick out her tongue They called me names. “Heavy foot,” “stegosaurus stomp rag,” Then they started talking about my mama. It was on!

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Date: 8/21/2019 8:26:00 PM
witty and fun poem Caren...you always find ways to bring laughter to others... enjoyed this one :) hugs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:44:00 AM
I thought "what if" and WHAM. There she was...
Date: 8/21/2019 8:12:00 PM
Shoe on the head... if you're talking bout my Mama...Nice one
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:44:00 AM
And shoe over your head if you're talking about mine...
Date: 8/21/2019 9:27:00 AM
A clever fun piece.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Richard. It was FUN for sure!
Date: 8/21/2019 8:09:00 AM
Oh my. Placate them with massage and new socks. Perhaps a nice soak? I know exactly how it is to have them turn on you. hehe..fun write. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:45:00 AM
I started this and thought "WHAT?" as it came out and stuck out its tongue at me.

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